Lonely Lights

I was about to say, I liked the twist of part one that it ended in a misunderstanding that pushed them apart. This could have made it unique and interesting to tell how they resolved that misunderstanding later in the story. But I was a little disappointed by the actual ending of the chapter which was quite a television cliché at this point.

For now, I'm not sure if I like "The Real Students of Magnolia Grove University". I wonder if it really adds something that could have not been told otherwise, especially with multiple protagonists and a shifting perspective.

It would have been intriguing if Leo's roommate would have been the one person that doesn't know his music, let alone he's famous. I'm sure, he would have appreciated it.